Correct this introduction if there is any mistake need to add and change any specific word to sound better.?
The following is the introduction of my essay:This passage contained one connect to violence and an unpredictable ending based on the mystery stranger me and my dear neighbor,Anne gold,who loved to eat walnuts,had faced together the terror on that spicial night during the past summer,when she came to sleepover at my house.we had both learned this one rule since that had happened to us,that you should never act before you think.
I find it hard to distinguish where one sentence starts and the next one ends. I honestly can’t tell that you are introducing an essay. Is this a book report? I’ll try to rearrange it so that it makes sense:
This book contains one connection to violence and an unpredictable ending. The protagonist and her dear neighbor (Anne gold – who loved to eat walnuts) faced a terror together on a special summer night. Anne had gone to sleepover at the protagonists house when a mystery stranger gave them both a fright. They both learned one rule since that night – that you should never act before you think.
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